A scary Viking story told in Grimm Fairy Tale mode
Once upon a dark time, a kingdom prospered. Yet, common folk whispered of a creature watching from the woods.
Fall came. The king’s daughters worked the harvest before winter painted land with snow and ice. While laboring, a huge creature burst from the forest, his skin cracked and gray. He grabbed them with hulking paws and disappeared.
The giant took them to the Land Beyond Land. The mountains of giants and dwarves.
Seasons changed. Courageous men stopped trying to save them. The king lost all hope.
Leaves turned gold and brown again. Tides brought a Viking ship. Asmund teamed with Egil the One-eyed, vowing safe return of the maids.
Before they left, the Vikings met a seer. The old man cast magic rune stones and gave strange advice:
Meet a giant to slay one.
She’ll be old and want your gold,
But, trust her stew when she asks you to be a goat.
They laughed at the rhyme. Surely the old man hit his head! They journeyed on and their stomachs rumbled. Nearby black goats munched green grass.
They killed one when a shrill voice blasted.
“You killed my favorite goat!”
A beak-nosed giantess bore down on them. Quick-thinking Asmund offered a gold ring.
Giants love their goats, but they love shiny things more.
Her black nails curved like talons, closing over it. “Mine.”
The men recalled the seer’s words. Asmund worked his charm on the giantess, and she sat with them, sharing her story.
Giant King Sidon banished her for insulting him. The gates of Land Beyond Land would open tonight for the Eve of the Dark Festival, a time when Shades roamed, stealing souls for the Underworld.
They asked about the royal maids.
The giantess, Oga, pointed to a tower on a cliff. “They weave for Sidon there.” Her gap-toothed smile held no cheer. “They die tonight…if they fail to present him with a worthy gift.”
The giantess whispered she wanted to cook Sidon in her cauldron.
“Get us inside. We’ll help you kill Sidon. Hide Asmund in your cauldron,” Egil said and pointed to the dead goat. “Sew me into your goat’s skin. Tell the guard you’ve come to cook goat stew for Sidon.”
The dark deal was struck, and night cloaked land.
Shades roamed freely this one fall night each year, stirring terror everywhere. Bonfires lit the land to ward off evil. But, Oga honored her word and carried them on her back through the gates, Asmund curled inside her hulking cauldron and Egil sewn into the dead goat’s skin.
Oga set her cauldron in the shadows. Egil pulled a small pouch and handed it to the giantess.
“Pour this poison in Sidon’s drink.”
She cackled her glee as the Vikings made their way up stone stairs. No torches burned. Asmund and Egil moved by stealth, but screeches and cries filled the air. Shades sunk their claws into their victims. Bones crunched, echoing in the castle.
Giants hovered around bonfires. None bothered to guard the maid’s tonight. Every giant sought to save his own grey skin.
The warriors found the maids frantically braiding a rope. Shabby dresses hung on thin bodies. Candles burned everywhere, shining on a rope stretched like a serpent across the room. The taller one beckoned them over.
“Don’t just stand there, Vikings. Come help.” She pointed to a beam. “Tie the end there.”
Asmund and Egil did as she bade.
The smaller one said, “They come for us at midnight.” Her glassy gaze darted to the door.
“We’ve worked all year…our gift for Sidon.” The taller one smirked and gave her name as Brynnhild. “His gift will set us free.”
“We must take candles with us…the Shades,” the smaller one whispered.
Beyond the door, giants’ voices grumbled. A pair of them argued who’d hold the torch and who’d go first upstairs. A loud, keening scream seeped through the door.
“The Shades!” Bekkhild jumped up from her stool. “Brynn, we must leave. NOW!”
All four climbed out a square opening cut in stone. They bit down on tapered candles, their hands and feet holding the silken rope. Wind blew cold fingers on their necks.
Or did a Shade test their flesh?
Thick clouds caused Asmund’s candle to fizzle. Egil’s soon followed. They inched down the rope into empty darkness.
When would this rope end and all could put their feet on the ground?
Bekkhild’s candle sputtered when a thick cloud circled around her. She opened her mouth. The candle dropped. No one heard the comforting sound of an object hitting earth.
“Brynn? Can you see the ground?”
“No. I’m, I’m at the end of the rope.” Brynnhild held the knot with one hand, the candle in the other.
The earth made a black hole, its maw ready to swallow them. None had the strength to crawl back up the rope.
“We can’t go back,” Egil said.
The silken threads rent an awful ripping sound. The rope was tearing.
“Should we let go and hope for ground?” Brynnhild asked, her voice shaking as she began to cry.
The Viking warriors sweated despite the cold. This was not the same as facing an enemy in battle. What lurked below?
“Are we all going to do this?” Asmund’s breath billowed a small cloud.
“I’m scared,” Brynnhild wailed.
Wind shrieked. An creepy chorus of howls sounded in the distance, moving closer.
“The Shades…they’re coming.”
“Our only chance…let go and hope the earth’s near.”
The rope jolted. More silk threads ripped. The women screamed. The Shade’s keening screeched closer…closer.
Asmund yelled, “On the count of three, let go at the same time.”
All nodded their assent.
“One,” he shouted over the wind.
“Two,” Egil yelled.
“Three!” They cried out as one body and dropped to the yawning black below.
To this day, visitors to Iceland’s famed volcano hear human voices in fall. Some drop candles into darkness below.
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*A loose adaptation of Asmund & Egil’s Saga
***993 words and your comments & critiques are welcomed. Thanks, Gina.***
Hi Gina! What a great start to the WEP blogfest! Vikings are so in at the moment so your story will be very popular! I’m not familiar with Asmund & Egil’s Saga, but I loved your story anyhow. There is a lot of humour there…at least I thought so. I can imagine hearing human voices in this volcano! A nasty end for the maids and the Vikings.
Thank you for participating in the blogfest, Gina! I hope you enjoy reading other entries, too.
I’ve left a message on the CBox at the WEP site, otherwise no one will know you have posted. Nas alerted me.
Denise
Hi Denise,
I’m glad you enjoyed the story. I look forward to reading the other blog posts. I had checked a few last week and didn’t see any, but will check again. I’ll start tweeting about this one, too.
Thanks,
Gina
Giants, prophecies, goat skins and magic powders!! This snippet has it all. What a great post.
Hi Gina, I love the mythological aspect of this story combined with a living volcano. Terrifically creepy tale!
Hi Jenny,
Thank you! It was fun to mix up a saga-like story and add the surprise ending there.
I appreciate you stopping by the blog-
Gina
Hi Raquel,
I’m glad you enjoyed the tale. The whole thing was fun from the writing to choosing the right images to go with the story.
Thanks for stopping by-
Gina
Oh, I love it, Gina! I held my breath… it has such a thrilling rhythm and images… and I’ve always been fascinated by Scandinavia. And Iceland. A great story!
Interesting post! I love the tidbit at the end about Iceland’s volcano.
The broekn sentences gave this an archaic feel- like a long-lost fairy tale. My favorite part was the shades- what a fantastic villain to fear!
Hi Vesper,
I’m glad you enjoyed the story’s rhythm and images. I love the Norse and have a special fascination for Iceland…such a unique place.
Thanks for stopping by!
Gina
Hi Chrys,
Thanks for stopping by. Glad you liked the ending.
Have a great day-
Gina
Hi Beverly,
Yes, I was going for the archaic feel. I LOVE history and I enjoy fairy tales. I have two of Grimm’s fairy books near my desk. The shades came as a last minute add-on to the story, but those instant inspirations can be the best, don’t you think?
Thanks for stopping by-
Gina
Vivid imagery in this well crafted fantasy story.
Great style and pace too…. it gives the impression of being in-the-moment!
Ahh! A Viking? Love it! Creepy and scary!
Is Brynnhild a variation of Broomhilda? That sounds like such a Bugs Bunny question but your blog projects such historical authority, I thought, what the heck. Why not ask her!
Hi Suze,
There likely is a connection in the names Brynnhild and Broomhilda, since Norse and Germanic people shared mythologies. And I loved Bugs Bunny growing up.
Thanks for stopping by and have a great day-
Gina
Hi Kelly,
Yay for Vikings. It was fun to mix it up with something worth a shiver or two.
I look forward to reading your blog and thanks for stopping by-
Gina
Hi Michelle,
Thanks you so much. I appreciate your comments.
have a great day-
Gina
Oooo, chilling, loved it! I imagine it was still a better ending than if the shades had caught them.
Shannon at The Warrior Muse
Now that’s a fairy tale with all the markings of Grimm. Loved it. Your hero’s and damsels were epic, worthy of Norse mythology.
……dhole
Vikings, giants, goats – excellent combination.
A tale well spun, Liked the inclusion of the riddle. Creative and a fun read!
Great story from up north, magic and Vikings and mythology!
Loved it!
trick or treat and happy Halloween!
Hi Yolanda,
Thanks so much. I’m glad you like my Norse take on a scary tale.
Thanks for stopping by-
Gina
Thanks Armchair Squid.
Gina
Hi Lisa,
Thanks for noticing the riddle. It was all fun to do. I hope you’re enjoying the blog hop.
Gina
Hi Donna,
Thanks for your kind praise!
Gian
Hi Shannon,
LOL! You comment about the ending made me laugh. It’s fun to do the unexpected, isn’t it? I look forward to your reading your post.
Thanks for stopping by-
Gina
Saturday November 2nd, 2013
Hi Gina,
What a scary story, and with an open ending… Who dropped? Did the other two survive?
I live in Sweden. I have spent time on Iceland. What is the inspiration for this story? Reading or have you been to Iceland? You have written a scary story with a Nordic touch, but isn’t Halloween more of a Celtic tradition? Ah, details…details…
Nice to meet you!
Best wishes,
Anna
Anna’s WEP-Challenge for October: Haunting
Hi Anna,
Thanks for stopping by the blog. I’ve never been to Iceland but have visited Sweden (a beautiful country). The inspiration for the story came from a Saga about Asmund and Egil. I loosely based this off their adventures but this tale is nothing like the sagas, other than the fact that Asmund and Egil do meet up with King Hertyrgg of the Rus. You’re right that Halloween is not a Viking tradition. There’s no mention of Halloween in the story, however, Vikings did have a lot of giants and dwarves in their lore. The Shades was my adaptation to make it a little scarier.
Nice to meet you, too, Anna-
Gina
A Viking tale and no happy ending to this one. I am unfamiliar with the Viking fairy tales so it is nice to read one.
Nancy
Hi Nancy,
Thanks for reading the story. This is a fairy tale in the Grimm Fairy Tale vein, which tended to be dark. Vikings didn’t have fairy tales but they had Sagas in their history. Those sagas were a mix of true history and story oddities that included giants and dwarves.
Have a great day-
Gina
Hi Gina. I came back for another read. This is deep and fascinating. I hope you enjoyed the blogfest.
Denise